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Let me tell you....

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The mattress is on the floor. There is one light on, just enough to cast the forms of things in the room. No kissing eyebrows here. *shakes finger*

A shirt off to promise closeness/ /pleasure. And I don't want your pants on anymore.

Feel the nakedness, now. Have your legs ever looked like that before? So...there?

but hey, you've been here before, haven't you? This is all in the routine, and I need to kick myself in the teeth before I drift off to the lies i think you are thinking that only accentuate the awkwardness I'm ascerting.

I want to swim against this awful/ /amazing current and do everything I want done to me.

I want to just stop, take it all in, and slowly..........slowly.........slowly........

I want to kiss your stomach, dust my fingertips against your thighs, and look innocently/ /guiltily up at you.

I want your heart to skip a beat. I want this to feel like hours.

rhythmic and torturing.

...............................................................................................but I'm just a writer.
about a scene in my head
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Well, i'll have to say that the first line drove me to read it. It's all about first impressions and the wording. I like that you are direct and straight to the point. Even though i myself tend to write LONG intros and then the "good" part, yours is all about the "good" part. Even though it didn't go into dirty details, it's the thoughts that causes one to wonder that makes this short prose so... magical (ok, that was a cheesy word). Anyway, it's overall real good and i like the way you end it. And remember, writers have the BEST imagination. Figure that one out.